The clips were good. Editing wise, I don't want to sound cliche especially talking about montages but maybe some sort of transition. Nothing over the top, but something subtle instead of jumping from clip to clip. Don't get me wrong there are definitely times to just jump from various clips but I don't think they do too well in montages. Maybe something fading to black. An exception would be if you matched clip transitions/jumps with the beat of a song. Like leading up to a drop.