(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Hey guys im a new upcoming commentator, Im really trying to be successfull in this, DO yall mind checking it out? Thanks guys! You must login or register to view this content.

pretty good for a first commentary. I have a couple of tips for you though.

•lower the gameplay sound, this should be about you not the game.
•You know your topic so try not to over think and take pauses, just be you and let the words flow out regardless if you kind of ramble. makes things in my opinion lively and shows some personality.
•You don't have your facial expressions to display your emotions (60% of communication is non verbal) you want to close the gap and be more expressive in your tone and demeanor of voice.
•Be a real ass nigga, nothing really special here just stay you, don't change for the channel.

Very helpull! Thanks nig haha