Hey what's up guys my name is RalphGuevara.

I had recently started a YouTube channel called RalphWentLive (yes so original)
But I was actually coming to show you a video that I had made. Just so I can actually get some feedback. On what I really need to do to actually you know, get known more.

I've been wanting to do this for so long, but I never felt like I was any good for it you know? I'm not all MLG and what not. Not only that my voice does bother me too, I feel like it's not very "commentary" sounding voice. But I really just want to be helped. By the community of people who actually play video games you know?
I don't want to go to any "Major Company". I want to learn from the community it's self.
So please go ahead and watch this video if you would like, tell me what I need to do to make it better, criticize me, I'll be able to handle the pain (hopefully)
And I'll try to change up what I do.
Thank you and I truly appreciate the ones who honestly do take the time and help.