(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); This is the first draft of the first song I wrote. I wrote all the parts AND played all the parts!! I am 14 so don't be so hard about the criticism, this is my first song. Sorry about some of the drum fail. I don't play drums very well.

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PLEASE GUYS do not steal my hard work!! Tell me some feedback and I'll take it into consideration.

Thanks,
Mtx_FuRy (Dr. FuRy)

i think your very good with the guitar and your very talented to put all your parts together ad your talented for knowing all these instruments my dad freind is the guy that owns mask out records and i think i can get you signed dude what your name

Whats a draft?

I think I'd need more info... I have a busy life at the moment being in high school and am only 14.

Thanks... Let me know when you can do better!

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This is my first recording put together. It's messy and that's why I call it a draft.

Improve on your flow and it would be amazing.(Instruments didn't match well together in beginning or its just me).

Great job, better than what i could do!

I recorded the two riffs in the intro separately to pan them left and right completely. I'll see if I can make it smoother.

Thanks

Not bad at all, I liked it. The beginning seems a bit choppy, and the instruments don't blend well, and the occasional "hard-hit" throughout the song, but overall, very impressive! I haven't played the guitar in a while, and I don't own a drum set, but I know what goes into mixing your own tracks, as I used to (and still occasionally) help him mix his own albums. You, being one person, are very talented, especially for only being 14 (which caught me off guard) and playing all the instruments and mixing the track.

Keep up the good work, because I will definitely return to hear more! :y:

Very rough draft, but reasonable for sure. Need to work on the sync in a few places there, Bass was a bit too high in a few sections, so might want to work on that a bit as well.

Overall, it isn't bad. Pretty good considering your only 14. Keep it up and you'll do well. Just work on keeping things clean, and make sure that you don't snipe to much from others... i.e. the one rift from Metallica in there was obviously not yours, but a good addition to your compilation.

Keep it up kid, you've got some talent.

I can help you with this kind of thing! =D

And yeah, music is my passion, I always find myself arranging songs for piano and guitar even on accident sometimes.

I really like it! :y: If you want you could send me the individual tracks and I mix it down in a few different styles... But it's great! =D