Post: Song I Wrote / Recorded
03-02-2011, 03:14 AM #1
Mtx_FuRy
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PLEASE GUYS do not steal my hard work!! Tell me some feedback and I'll take it into consideration.

Thanks,
Mtx_FuRy (Dr. FuRy)
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03-31-2011, 10:29 PM #11
Mtx_FuRy
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Originally posted by LSD View Post
i.e. the one rift from Metallica in there was obviously not yours, but a good addition to your compilation


Which riff? I don't listen to Metallica so I had no clue I took one of their riffs O.o
03-31-2011, 10:31 PM #12
Agent_LSD
Vault dweller
Originally posted by FuRy View Post
Which riff? I don't listen to Metallica so I had no clue I took one of their riffs O.o


It is old school Metallica, and only about 10 seconds or so.
But like I said, keep it up. It sounds pretty damn good considering your age. You'll only get better at it if you keep doing what you are doing.
03-31-2011, 10:48 PM #13
Mtx_FuRy
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Originally posted by LSD View Post
It is old school Metallica, and only about 10 seconds or so.
But like I said, keep it up. It sounds pretty damn good considering your age. You'll only get better at it if you keep doing what you are doing.


Thanks for the constructive criticism! This recording is the unmixed version. I'm mixing it and it's taking a long time since I am not the expert at this stuff lol.

And yeah, music is my passion, I always find myself arranging songs for piano and guitar even on accident sometimes.
03-31-2011, 10:54 PM #14
Agent_LSD
Vault dweller
Originally posted by FuRy View Post
Thanks for the constructive criticism! This recording is the unmixed version. I'm mixing it and it's taking a long time since I am not the expert at this stuff lol.

And yeah, music is my passion, I always find myself arranging songs for piano and guitar even on accident sometimes.


I've got a wicked good ear, and as such can be extremely critical of minor mistakes, so just wanted to point out a few things. Definitely not going to be like the douch that said it was worse than that berber twat.

Funny thing is I love electronica, and techno, but if hook doesn't kick in within about 15 or 20 seconds I generally won't listen to the entire track. Way too F'n critical sometimes lol...
03-31-2011, 11:39 PM #15
Mtx_FuRy
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Originally posted by LSD View Post
I've got a wicked good ear, and as such can be extremely critical of minor mistakes, so just wanted to point out a few things. Definitely not going to be like the douch that said it was worse than that berber twat.

Funny thing is I love electronica, and techno, but if hook doesn't kick in within about 15 or 20 seconds I generally won't listen to the entire track. Way too F'n critical sometimes lol...


My ear is still developing. My favorite music is rock from the 70's and 80's. Skynyrd, Zeppelin, GNR, Van Halen, that good stuff Happy oh and can't forget Frampton.
04-01-2011, 12:37 AM #16
Agent_LSD
Vault dweller
Originally posted by FuRy View Post
My ear is still developing. My favorite music is rock from the 70's and 80's. Skynyrd, Zeppelin, GNR, Van Halen, that good stuff Happy oh and can't forget Frampton.


Yeah, it felt that way. Have you listened to any Eric Johnson? That guy is an amazing guitarist. Always blown away when I see what he's able to do with a guitar.
04-01-2011, 01:55 AM #17
Mtx_FuRy
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Originally posted by LSD View Post
Yeah, it felt that way. Have you listened to any Eric Johnson? That guy is an amazing guitarist. Always blown away when I see what he's able to do with a guitar.


Yeah I love his version of Cliffs of Dover from his live 1990 album. I can't remember the title of the album... It's something something Musicom... :/
04-01-2011, 01:58 AM #18
xScreamo!
Trading Kids For Angel Dust
Originally posted by FuRy View Post
I think I'd need more info... I have a busy life at the moment being in high school and am only 14.


Fresh men noob :p
04-01-2011, 11:58 AM #19
Mtx_FuRy
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Originally posted by xScreamo
Fresh men noob :p


So what I'm young? I'm more mature than people my age by a longshot.

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