Post: What You Think of My Rap?
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03-31-2011, 09:37 PM
#1
Scarface
C.R.E.A.M.
I'm 16 & get my inspiration from 80s & 90s hip hop & underground.
Here's some bars I wrote yesterday, what you guys think?
Just sit back, relax & listen how I react on the track..
I be eatin niggas up like jaws
Followed you home, kicked down your door
Run up on that ass, put ur brain on the floor
Think about it before you step to me G
Watch yourself when you walk through my street
You'll get beat or feel the led from my heat, simply defeat.
Rush to high, don't try to enter my mental state, you'll break
with any fat rhymes that you make
A smooth groove that gives you contraction, back with a Mac 10, prepare for action..
I represent, the hostile & wild, a funky child my style flow like the Nile
My mic is burnin, back up don't touch ya
I'll crush ya, like the breakdown of Russia
Don't test, the lyrical style I possess, protect your chest from the best with the best, im flawless because many brothas make a mess, it's the stress that got me buckin like the rest.
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03-31-2011, 10:11 PM
#12
!x-MONKEY-BOMB!
League Champion
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03-31-2011, 10:15 PM
#13
AgentJon
Former Staff
Now spit that shit back.
It's one thing to write it, now you gotta rap it.
Like me:
[ame=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j_m2PaMHSqc]YouTube - Jon raps - Welcome to my life freestyle[/ame]
It's one thing to write it, now you gotta rap it.
Like me:
03-31-2011, 11:16 PM
#14
Scarface
C.R.E.A.M.
Originally posted by Ownage
Can't be afraid to record
It takes some balls to record and sound decent
It takes some balls to record and sound decent
Wait you sayin I'm scared? Nigga I'm not I just don't wanna record that's all.
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Originally posted by Botz
I know but I just don't want to record.
03-31-2011, 11:46 PM
#15
Illmatic_96
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Not bad though
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04-01-2011, 02:09 AM
#18
Illmatic_96
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04-01-2011, 02:54 AM
#19
Scarface
C.R.E.A.M.
Originally posted by 96
Im pretty sure he says something about his flow and it being smooth like the nile or something like that. I dont know what song though i cant remember for shit.
Deadass? Well I swear I wrote that off the top of the dome I know some of it is wack but w.e I wrote that shit in like 30 mins. You ever wrote a few bars?
---------- Post added at 10:54 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:12 PM ----------
Originally posted by 96
Im pretty sure he says something about his flow and it being smooth like the nile or something like that. I dont know what song though i cant remember for shit.
Btw yo your crip?
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