Post: doritos poem
07-17-2011, 09:48 PM #1
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doritos poem: "Doritos & Mountain Dew

ur so yummy
but even better wen ur with
mountain dew


mountain dew
ur so thirst quenching
but u need somthing 2 make me thristy like
doritos

doritos
so many flavors
my favorite
cool ranch
but u also hav bad flavors
1 example is
halepeno
but 2 get that taste out
wats better than
mountain dew?

mountain dew
also
many flavors
but still they r all good


yet
mountaiun dew
&
doritos

r both best
2gether

doritos & mountain dew
a match made in heaven
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moolikeacow
07-17-2011, 11:50 PM #11
I'm speechless. /facepalm
07-18-2011, 12:02 AM #12
Choco
Respect my authoritah!!
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
This thread is shitty
Unlike mountain dew.

:carling:

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kevin46571
07-18-2011, 04:31 PM #13
beautiful...just beautiful :O
07-18-2011, 09:13 PM #14
<Jimbo>
</Jimbo>
It was in no way a personal attack, I just felt as though you were basing your criticism on a misinformed idea, I appreciate that you have elaborated. Smile

However I am glad that you are able to display your literary knowledge to me after taking the time to Google it.

Thank you for verbally attacking me like I am an absolute dick.


Originally posted by The
1. As a reporter my expertise would not specifically include that of poetry. Poetry is only one part of literary study and thus not everyone will have an advanced understanding of poetry. You wouldn't expect a reporter for a large news corporation to be educated in poetry would you? Then why would you automatically expect it of me?

2. No poetry does not always consist of rhyming words or phrases, but for the most part using rhymes in a poem will add to the flow and readability of the poem. In this case the flow and readability is zero. I was suggesting that the use of rhymes may have added to the quality of the poem.

Thank you for attacking me about it though. Maybe next time you shouldn't assume I am misinformed or uneducated.
07-18-2011, 09:24 PM #15
The Open Minded
☮✌Peace Maker✌☮
Originally posted by lt
It was in no way a personal attack, I just felt as though you were basing your criticism on a misinformed idea, I appreciate that you have elaborated. Smile

However I am glad that you are able to display your literary knowledge to me after taking the time to Google it.

Thank you for verbally attacking me like I am an absolute dick.


Well if you are going to question my education or literary skills then please expect a very educated response. Also for your information I did not Google anything. I have no need to use Google or any other outside source of knowledge to form an educated response. And if you feel I am treating you like you are a dick.. Well those are your words. Not mine.
07-18-2011, 09:31 PM #16
.JiampyPotter
So Much Win.
Originally posted by chocomonkey321 View Post
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
This thread is shitty
Unlike mountain dew.

:carling:


:lol: your poem is better.
07-26-2011, 07:25 AM #17
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Dylan
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This is the shittiest thing I've ever read

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