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02-19-2014, 06:01 PM #1

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Hello NGU!

This isn't something I'd ordinarily do but I'm really looking for some feedback for a friend who I think is a very talented young rapper which isn't something we usually see out of the Caribbean.. (Cayman Islands to be precise..) He goes by OPrehay and he is the first rapper in the video, as far as I'm concerned the next rapper is borderline decent and the last rapper is trash.

The second song is just audio and personally one of my favorites! The flow is ill once he gets started!

I'd appreciate any feedback/criticisms the community will give. Coming from a island so small he doesn't get enough to help him grow.
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Will +100 Rep to those that actually leave feedback!

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02-20-2014, 04:27 PM #11

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02-22-2014, 05:10 AM #12

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02-22-2014, 05:16 AM #13

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First guy snapped, the rest sounded like every other basic rapper

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02-22-2014, 06:32 PM #14

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Originally posted by xScreamo

First guy snapped, the rest sounded like every other basic rapper

Thanks for the feedback bro! +Rep

02-24-2014, 08:10 PM #15

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02-24-2014, 10:02 PM #16

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First guy is very good, i like the beat. He has a lot of potential.

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Originally posted by Mugen904

First guy is very good, i like the beat. He has a lot of potential.

Much appreciated! +Repped

02-27-2014, 07:21 AM #18

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02-27-2014, 07:42 AM #19

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Pretty good rapping from you friend. If he does get popular (with the talent he has its possible) tell hem not to let the money and fame get to you and stay away from all drugs and if he get hateful comment in social media there's always an 'OFF' button and a 'BLOCK' button. Anyway he's really good.