1) The text isn't good.
2) The clipping masks on the left side is to much, try probably taking away some from the top.
3) Needs more depth.
4) Could have darkened the sides more.
5) Maybe some C4D's by the render.
6) Not liking the colors, maybe going with just green would have been better.
~Inferno
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The colors next to the light source are over contrasted, With the light source being too bright as well.
Work on the quality it looks LQ at the moment and adjust the clipp mask as well they seem to randomly scattered and do not contribute to the compo. Take out the txt it is really distracting