Originally posted by Ace
Honestly to me it's not that great.
1) The text isn't good.
2) The clipping masks on the left side is to much, try probably taking away some from the top.
3) Needs more depth.
4) Could have darkened the sides more.
5) Maybe some C4D's by the render.
6) Not liking the colors, maybe going with just green would have been better.
~Inferno
Only thing i dont agree with that is #3, look at the bg dude its full of depth to reference of the render, and #6, i made the color match with the stock, it fits perfectly and has a good color flow, now if you just dont like that color personally then thats different but its not filled with random colors like your making it seem