Originally posted by Depression
I really have to admit, it doesn't look too too much different. The transitions between the microchip and the black, the entire bottom left and right, and the top-middle transition (that honestly looks like the spraypaint brush in Paint) are still a bit sketchy. If you can make the top one smooth, and then give the others some more dynamic effects like the one I think is really good, you'll be perfect.
And no problem, I like helping. ^.^