(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Heres my first real sig in 4 months, this is my 4th ever sig, please comment and tell me how to improve.

UPDATED COMMENTS:

looks slightly better with masking moved around a bit, and render edges blured slightly and lighting brightened up abit, i also fixed the border because on v1 the render was leaking over slighty.

Things i like:

clip masting and scan dots

Things i think need improving:

The lighting is slightly dark on the purple area and i also think some of the background brushes like the circles and the stick things coming off the side might be a bit much, i also thing the sides of the render need to be slightly blured :/ to blend it in a bit.

Version2

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Version1:

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Nice Work Dan One Question Whats the differance between V1 n V2??

Clip masking slightly changed, boarder fixed, lighting changed, render blended better, their only slight changes.

Good use of vectors. Very good for a fourth sig imo. Only thing I don't like is the text.