(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Heres my first real sig in 4 months, this is my 4th ever sig, please comment and tell me how to improve.

UPDATED COMMENTS:

looks slightly better with masking moved around a bit, and render edges blured slightly and lighting brightened up abit, i also fixed the border because on v1 the render was leaking over slighty.

Things i like:

clip masting and scan dots

Things i think need improving:

The lighting is slightly dark on the purple area and i also think some of the background brushes like the circles and the stick things coming off the side might be a bit much, i also thing the sides of the render need to be slightly blured :/ to blend it in a bit.

Version2

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It's brilliant Dan, although I see 1 problem, where is the pedobear? XD

Its good for a forth sig =]

The render looks a little slapped on to me maybe you could blend it in to the bg a little?

The white splatter mark in the top left hand corner doesnt really fit well with the rest of the sig imo

but good use of colour and i think the lightings fine =]

You kinda said it yourself, the whole tag apart from the light itself looks too dark, and the render has a few choppy edges where it could be blended in better, rest is cool.

version 2 now up looks slightly better imo.

Looks better Not sure on the clipping mask / font though still. I'd like to see it without the text / clipping mask.

i used splatter brushes and then masked them i do see what your getting at tho i think they look a bit crappy, and on the text side of things i used PS default text since i was too lazy to go look in dafonts + ive never been good at getting the text style right >.<

nice dan love it just as sexy as my sig

Yeah man I see your point, but I really don't see why people insist on putting text in sigs. Other than to stop rippers, it just ruins a perfectly good tag. Unless the text really fits in with the rest of the sig, it just looks slapped on and doesn't work. I might make a tutorial on putting text on tags.

yak, this thread kills all spelling ever invented.

on topic: The vector brushes or stocks, witchever may have been used, weren't put to make flow witch is a bad thing but i do like the lighting and there is a bit of depth to it. the text needs work but, everyones text needs work.

Text be hard =/.

Your sigs pretty good for your fourth :O but like taco said vectors should be used to create flow. This sig is missing flow because of that reason. Otherwise it seems good, the text could be better but as taco said most peoples does.