Post: Help with essay
01-10-2013, 02:20 AM #1
zertzHD
Bounty hunter
(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); So I have to write an essay on the cons of the death penalty.


Can you guys send some links that will hopefully help me? I need 3 key points as to why the death penalty is bad. I'm thinking of using that the cost is too much, the chance of error, and I need one more.

I also need a catchy hook. I would usually be fine with doing this myself, but I am beyond tired and can't really think straight right now. Not asking for you guys to do my essay, just send me links with info that'll help with my essay, and possibly a strong hook.

I can't offer anything as of yet, but I will be more then happy to +rep you, and I'll pay more attention to your posts, which could lead to more +rep Winky Winky
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01-10-2013, 04:30 AM #20
zertzHD
Bounty hunter
Originally posted by Pichu View Post
Grade 9? You don't write this in grade 9, it's the thought within it. This is right around junior to senior level writing which is equivalent to English 101.


I'm talking about the revised piece you posted, not the work you did.
01-10-2013, 02:01 PM #21
ResistTheSun
In Flames Much?
Justice by prison and means rehabilitation. Justice by death means you don't fix the problem.
It much better to give somebody a opportunity. No in fairness in death just a opportunity to brush away problems.

Pichu has given you some great advice , not much I can add.

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