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A gfx battle against yourself?

nope its against a friend, vote plz

I voted for the B&W one, although I think the text is a bit immature and there is a lot of text scattered, it is better than the top one. I would just keep the Simplicity and Graham, put them closer together and make them a bit closer in shading, as well as a tiny border around simplicity would be a nice touch. Also, the border is a bit weird. I do like the effects and the fades going on in it, not bad for a black and white sig, although a bit of color would have been nice, maybe even for the text or a burst of color somewhere.

The top one is a bit messy, it is too bold and has too much of an unfinished feeling. It doesn't feel clean. The colors aren't very enjoyable together, try going with the flow of a few colors over several. With the blue swirl going on, it is a bit too thick and should thin out, maybe emboss it a bit too for a nice effect and continue it off the image, it looks a bit odd having both ends finish in the image with no astonishing end point. The text does not match anything else in the signature, definitely color it differently with different texture too and maybe a smaller border around it. The lighting to the left isn't bad, again maybe try similar colors. I do enjoy the effects you have going across the entire sig, they flow very well. If you can find that perfect flow, this signature can be remade much better. Also, a very clean, tiny border would be a nice touch! Nice effort, just clean it up a bit and it should be much better.

i realise i had the text scattered but i only scattered graham becasue it was advertisement like i ALWAYS do, and simplicity there slogan or what ever is better than sex, and i thought makin them that much differant shading would make it better then just black and white and i might add like a burst of a differant color

Thats fine about having your advertisement of your name on it, I just think that it creates 2 focal points which really isn't needed that often in sigs, especially with text. You can still have that there I'm just suggesting that you get a rid of the slogan or whatever, and put it closer to that. And with the shade of it, I mean how pitch black and opaque it is, I like what you did with 'simplicity', I would recommend something like that or a similar style, that's all. And the border around simplicity, which can easily be created, might look nice, you will just have to judge for yourself. You got my vote, I'm just trying to support you and your work with constructive criticism, I always make sure to say may then wow thats awesome, or that really sucks, to try and help the artist expand off of what they already have. I always appreciate it because it helps people grow as an artist. When something is perfect I make sure to say that, too, as it does happen a lot with the great talents around here. Plus, you got my vote, and I thought yours was pretty good on top of that.

Oh and make sure to quote people when replying to them, it makes it easier for them to reply back on here, and seeing that you are new, Welcome to NGU!

The 2nd one is defo better :y:

I'ma take your advice and ima show you when im done tell me if you like =) and thanks for welcoming me I just showed up because friend but I will stay

Cool, let me know when you finish the next version. And No Problem!

I tested everything out but I thought this was best as you can see it makes a huge differant but without doin almost anything
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